Kia ora! I am a year 6 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Maty, I liked reading your story about hunting, it was very enjoyable. Maybe next time you could have your title separate from your WALT and then your blurb explaining what the task is about. You could also write what you learned or enjoyed and what you found challenging or would like to improve on. Keep up the good effort! Ms Peters.
Hi Maty its Harry from Paroa This is a very good piece of writing about hunting I have only been hunting once how many times have you? I like how have a bit of discriptive writing in it.maybe next time you could write a bit more?
Kia ora Maty, I liked reading your story about hunting, it was very enjoyable. Maybe next time you could have your title separate from your WALT and then your blurb explaining what the task is about. You could also write what you learned or enjoyed and what you found challenging or would like to improve on. Keep up the good effort! Ms Peters.
ReplyDeleteHi Maty its Harry from Paroa
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good piece of writing about hunting I have only been hunting once how many times have you? I like how have a bit of discriptive writing in it.maybe next time you could write a bit more?
Ive been about three hundred time`s.
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