Kia ora! I am a year 6 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Maty, I enjoyed the part when you researched and found facts about water use. What is the cause of your environmental problem? I ask this because you have used the same information for your example. Next time you could use a capital letter on your title. I look forward to seeing your investigation when it is completed. Keep up the great work! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Maty,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you researched and found facts about water use. What is the cause of your environmental problem? I ask this because you have used the same information for your example. Next time you could use a capital letter on your title. I look forward to seeing your investigation when it is completed. Keep up the great work! Ms Peters.